#44. Made the sentence shorter and easier to understand #55
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Issue:
In the lines below if feel the statement which is in italics is unclear and could be better phrased.
"The podcast is used to inform the Linux and Open Source communities as to the current state in development of open source initiatives" and Linux Foundation Projects. It is vendor neutral, with no interviews of commercial product vendors or sales teams.
The following change has been made:
Before:
"The podcast is used to inform the Linux and Open Source communities as to the current state in development of open source initiatives. It is vendor neutral, with no interviews of commercial product vendors or sales teams."
After:
"The podcast updates the Linux and Open Source communities on the current state in development of open source initiatives. It is vendor neutral, without interviewing commercial product vendors or sales teams."
Thus the sentence is now shorter and more clear.