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@kloenk kloenk force-pushed the matrixcore-profile-settings branch from 9f087fa to dd89f70 Compare March 31, 2022 09:52
@kloenk kloenk marked this pull request as ready for review March 31, 2022 12:44
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Looks good to me. There's a quite a few self.xyz where the self. isn't needed. Would be nice to drop them where possible. Other general comments inline 🙂


var body: some View {
List {
Section(header: Text("USER SETTINGS")) {
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The heading should upper case this by itself I believe. Also if you're targeting iOS 15 (not sure) you can simply pass the string. Same comment for all the headers :)

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Section(header: Text("USER SETTINGS")) {
Section("User Settings") {

}

// Password
Button("Change password", role: .destructive) {
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I wouldn't mark this as destructive myself, if something bad is going to happen it should show an alert explaining this instead, otherwise changing password should probably feel like a safe operation to the user.

let nioAccount = store.accounts[account.userID!]!

if let displayName = changes["displayName"] as? String {
NioAccountStore.logger.debug("Changing displayName to \(displayName)")
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Is it necessary to actually log the new displayname? Always seems like a good habit to me to avoid logging personal data where possible. (Unless Logger redacts this string interpolation by default, in which case ignore me as I haven't used it in a while).

.navigationBarTitleDisplayMode(.inline)
.toolbar {
ToolbarItem {
Button(action: {
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As the label is simply text label, it's probably neater to

Button("Save") {
    // do stuff
}


// TODO: verified/unverified devices sections?
Section(header: Text("Devices")) {
ForEach(devices, id: \.deviceID) { device in
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Side note: We should probably conform MatrixDevice to Identifiable.

.refreshable {
await self.updateDevices()
}
.toolbar {
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Personally I'd consolidate the 2 toolbar modifiers into 1, but I can see why you might prefer 2 :)

private func delete(at offsets: IndexSet) {
let idsToDelete = offsets.map { self.devices[$0].deviceID }

_ = idsToDelete.compactMap { id in
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_ = idsToDelete.compactMap { id in
idsToDelete.forEach { id in

struct ProfileSettingsSecurityDeviceView: View {
let device: MatrixDevice

let subText: String
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let subText: String
let subtext: String

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Button(action: {
self.setDisplayName()
}) {
Text("Save")
}
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Button(action: {
self.setDisplayName()
}) {
Text("Save")
}
Button("Save") {
self.setDisplayName()
}

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if editMode == .active {
Button("Cancel") {
self.selection.removeAll()
withAnimation {
self.editMode = .inactive
}
}
} else {
Button("Edit") {
withAnimation {
self.editMode = .active
}
}
}
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Where possible, it's useful to update the parameters on a view rather than switching out the view for a new one:

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if editMode == .active {
Button("Cancel") {
self.selection.removeAll()
withAnimation {
self.editMode = .inactive
}
}
} else {
Button("Edit") {
withAnimation {
self.editMode = .active
}
}
}
Button(editMode.isEditing ? "Cancel" : "Edit") {
if editMode.isEditing {
self.selection.removeAll()
withAnimation {
self.editMode = .inactive
}
} else {
withAnimation {
self.editMode = .active
}
}
}

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